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I sit alone behind these dark foreboding walls,
A feeling of loneliness overwhelms me,
I sit, trapped by my memories,
The light from the barred window my only hope,
Darkness surrounds me, as I remember your touch,
Soft and gentle, warm and loving,
I remember the good times we shared,
All the perfect moments,
Trapped in a capsule inside my head,
I choose to forget the hate and the anger,
The bitterness from years of abuse,
The bruises I suffered at your hands,
The scars you left upon my mind and body,
The memories thus are warped,
And in my memories I forgive you,
But in reality, I am consumed by hate,
Enveloped by anger toward you,
What had I done to deserve that?
Nothing I can recall,
All I did was love you,
And give you my all,
And in return you hated me,
And left me trapped in my own prison...

~trippin~
A dark poem about the abuse one person suffers at the hands of another, be it physical or mental
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:iconcoolkimmy:
coolkimmy Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
I'm crying right now because I can relate to that
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Kayarlynnean Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2006
Same as what neverbeliever said
My father abuses me too
Although it is only emotional
He occasionally hits me
It's not very often though
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dolphin-girl-2007 Featured By Owner May 30, 2006
beautifully wrote!!! These types of poems are the best even if they are sad. I guess I just like them so much because i know where your coming from.
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lapego Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
beautiful....even if this feelings, which i can relate to, are so sad..
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neverbeliever Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2005
I understand that more than I'd like to.


"But in reality, I am consumed by hate,
Enveloped by anger toward you,
What had I done to deserve that?
Nothing I can recall, "
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neverbeliever Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2005
I understand that more than I'd like to.


"But in reality, I am consumed by hate,
Enveloped by anger toward you,
What had I done to deserve that?
Nothing I can recall, "
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MedStock Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2004   Writer
Cold. I feel that.
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